Gracious

The minor character that is the most intriguing to me would have to be Lucy. Lucy is a ghost that lives in the graveyard that Finch takes care of. She isn't that old. When she was a little girl her mom would dress her up and put her in beauty pagents. Her mom always had her in the spot light of everything. Lucy didn't like to get dress up and she hated her mother for doing that. Lucy died because she killed herself at the beach by putting a gun in her mouth. Her mom said it was a murder and the community believed her. But Finch can talk to her and knows that she killed herself. Finch tries to tells Lucy's mom that. Lucy is my favorite minor character because she is there when Finch needs to talk to her. She is fairy happy even though she is a gost. She does some crazy things for a ghost.

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3) Maybe working on grabing the readers attention and touching up on the introduction and conclusion.
4) First I wrote three ideas down and picked the one that most interested me. Then I did some freewriting about the topic to get more information about it.
5) I wrote my rough draft out. Than I want over it and than typed it on the computer. Than I had three people proof read my paper.
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